6 Responses to Chapter 5 | Page 132

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    Frank Harr says:

    I don’t know. He seems self-undermining.

    A mule should do it.

    This looks like it’ll be a fun scene.

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    Thorin Schmidt says:

    A fun scene is where charlie gets to say what everyone else is thinking, and the Big Bad has to take it because it’s Charlie.

    Also: Pies in the face.

    Yet I doubt The Author, much as I admire and support his efforts, is capable yet of delivering literary humor of that high level. I choose to give him time though. I see much potential in him, and know he will in time rise higher in his craft.

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