14 Responses to Chapter 1 | Page 09

  1. Alas, poor Roderick! He never should have taken his eyes off Charlie!

    She backhanded his arm off her, and looks like she’s about to “Fronthand” his face……

    • wintermute says:

      Naw, she folded her arms again in the last frame.

      If she hits him in the face, another backhand would be quicker 😉

      (I’m imagining Charlie breaking out with the Bruce Lee Wing Chun moves, left backhand to the face followed immediately by a right straight punch to the solar plexus)

  2. Uhl says:

    As I recall, there was the promise of a kiss or something similar during the prologue when Roddy led those two into the giant drill.

  3. wintermute says:

    So what I’m hearing you say is that Roddy is a version of the author’s younger self?

    This could be fun!

  4. Apvogt says:

    Roddy I’d get away if I were you, you’re next on her list.

    • mvandinter says:

      It’s nice to see that someone is concerned about Roddy’s welfare 😉

      • Hey, Roddy fulfills a vital role in this story.
        He is the:
        “Protagonist Most Likely to Cause Conflict in the Absence of a Villain.” or the PMLCCAV, for short, sort of. hmmm….

        He fulfills the role of: Jerk!
        There, much shorter.

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