Ah, one shoulder? That’s it? You couldn’t tease us with just a little bit more? Also, in the second panel you have the one servant asking “we would we be”; I think you need to remove that second ‘we’ if you possibly can.
Suggestive, not cheesecake. Just enough to show she’s undressing, I don’t mind cheesecake, just it’s not in her personality to behave like that. I seriously doubt she’d be ok with a bikini, much less a one-piece.
Ah, one shoulder? That’s it? You couldn’t tease us with just a little bit more? Also, in the second panel you have the one servant asking “we would we be”; I think you need to remove that second ‘we’ if you possibly can.
Suggestive, not cheesecake. Just enough to show she’s undressing, I don’t mind cheesecake, just it’s not in her personality to behave like that. I seriously doubt she’d be ok with a bikini, much less a one-piece.
I figure he tried and Alice refused.
HEY! You got see her KNEES on the previous page! This is a graphical novel! Not some Tawdry Victorian-era Peepshow!
Now, as for the French side of the river…
^got to see^
I’m sure there’s forum out there for people with shoulder fetishes.
Woo-hoo!
Put it on! Put it on!
Will do!